Suffocation: Revisions – Yukon Beach

Notes: Marixi are the only caste with no hair; having sex with humans is illegal, but not-enforced; Holy Cross is a walled city in Alaska, but the pole has drifted–it’s not so cold there anymore; Yukon Beach (outside Cross) in one of only two human ports that allow Femmar to mingle with civilians–the other is found in Zealand.

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Final Revisions: Suffocation

Cleaning up the manuscript for Suffocation–based on editorial reader’s suggestions. This thing’s been read so many times by me (and my editor), that we decided to get a fresh set of eyes to look it over, and give us her thoughts.

I’m sharing this scene with Sofita and Pitana Dag, because I like Dag.

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